I watched the video about "Diwai", which is one of the most significant festival in India and it is called "the Festival of Light". The festival is the new year's festival of Hinduism. It's a five-day celebration that includes good food, fireworks, colored sands, and special candles and lamps.
I have never known the festival. I examined for the festival from wikipedia, if you go shopping during the festival, you'll be happy, so the store put effort into sale. I want to go to India during "Diwai".

It sounds good. I want to experience this festival. The photo is attractive. I thought about your English grammer and the forms of a word. You need to correct some errors.
返信削除"sale"→"sales"
Also, I thought that a verb "examined for" is incorrect. Maybe,I think "examine into".
That's all.
Hi,Chiaki
返信削除Thank you for your advice!